A Sketch

​I sketched my mother a little while ago.

On a sheet pure like her soul.

Waves of charcoal lined up in grace 

To form her angelic face.


Her sparkling eyes that used to cherish everything,

Were today stuck at one place.

I, being a little selfish,

Drew them like they are watching my face.


While shading her cheeks I remembered,

How beautiful she used to look.

Never did I see them dull,

Never did I see them crook.


Her lips that sang to me once

were suddenly shut today. 

I shaded it darker and darker.

Longing and craving for it to say. Anything that I will keep alive always and in every way.


Her voice is in my head that didn’t die.

She had short hairs that would always fly across my cheeks and across my eyes.

But today they were not undone.

Instead, tied in a bun.


When I shaded her hand I recollected the memory of my hand in hers. 

How mystically just being in them my wounds would start to cure.

I still feel her hands that dried.

My happy tears and sad cries.


I shaded my mother a little while ago.

And now, a little more about her I know.

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  1. shikha rai

    Speechless😘😘
    I love u 😘😘😘
    Keep it beta…

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    1. A learning poet

      Woww i turned you speechlessπŸ˜‚thankyou dear😊

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  2. Mr.Lonely

    Beautiful!!!

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks!

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      1. Mr.Lonely

        Welcome πŸ™‚

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  3. Megala

    Fantastic poem !

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou 😊

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  4. Amisha Singh

    Heart touching…
    beautifull…

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    1. A learning poet

      I am glad you liked it☺

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  5. radhikasreflection

    The sketch and the poem are so very beautiful!

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks a ton☺

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  6. ruebamughal

    Each line is as beautiful as you draw her and as she really was. Beautiful, amazing. 😊😘😘😘

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    1. A learning poet

      Woww… That is my honour… Thankyou for the lovely comment 😊😊

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  7. SubbsEEE

    ΰ€…ΰ€¦ΰ€­ΰ₯ΰ€€ , ΰ€…ΰ€΅ΰ₯ΰ€¦ΰ€Ώΰ€€ΰ₯€ΰ€― ΰ₯€ΰ₯€ΰ₯€ΰ₯€

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    1. A learning poet

      ΰ€§ΰ€¨ΰ₯ΰ€―ΰ€΅ΰ€Ύΰ€¦πŸ™

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  8. Ocean Bream

    This is beautiful, and the sketch is so full of love. I can feel it in the lines.

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    1. A learning poet

      That is my honour… Much much thanks for your time😊

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  9. Aanchal

    Such a beautiful post.

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou so much😊

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  10. Heart to soul.

    Well, I am always upset that I never got a chance to meet her! But you know when I see you I am so sure that you are just like her. You reflect her compassion, kindness and positivity. So I don’t think she is gone somewhere. You have very well managed to keep her alive forever in you. She lives in your smile, in your goodness.
    About the sketch! It’s the beauty of the both the ladies – the one who is in picture and the one who has sketched it, which took it to next level of perfection. And about the poem! You are writing your soul these days! Every word can be felt and every emotion can be experienced. I wasn’t reading it, I was deciphering it.
    Your mother is so proud of you. Believe me. 😊

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    1. A learning poet

      I don’t know what to say… As a child when someone said that you look like your mother, I used to fight because I always wanted to be told that I resemble my father… But today the only thing I want is to become atleast 1% like her… Trust me, I am not even close to what she was… But yes I try my best…. Thankyou so much… This is the loveliest comment I could get.. 😊 may God bless you

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      1. Heart to soul.

        ☺️

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  11. Seema

    Lovely……

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks alot😊

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  12. Jeni G.J

    Beautiful.. Now I got to see the better version of the photo hanging on the wall. This poem would have given you peace. It gave me too. Keep writing dear. May your mom’s blessings be with you.

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    1. A learning poet

      First of all, it is the biggest compliment to realise that you remember about that picture on the wall… I can’t explain how happy I am after reading your comment… Yes, this poem is really close to my heart… Thankyou for stopping by… And may God bless you😊😊

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      1. Jeni G.J

        Keep smiling😊 It’s close to my heart too. Gudnyt

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      2. Jeni G.J

        I have a written a poem ‘life of an orphan’. Do read when you find time. You may like it.

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      3. A learning poet

        DoneπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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  13. Matroos Beek

    So beautiful!

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    1. A learning poet

      My pleasures 😊

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  14. Arun singh

    Shabd nahi hai

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks paa😊

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  15. gary j

    love the sketch, beautiful work. (and of course the poem)

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou😊

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      1. gary j

        you are not learning, well we all do that all our lives, I read your work and you are a teacher, I am so thankful for your contribution. please accept you are teaching by learning… peace and love to you and yours…it is my evolution to read your work.

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      2. A learning poet

        Woww… I accept it… I believe that we all are teachers for oneself. We motivate ourselves. We fight for ourselves… and yes we also work to improve oneself… I am really honoured by knowing that you learn from my posts… But it is your greatness that you find time to read my posts… Thankyou so much for that😊

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  16. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    The poem is as beautiful as the sketch. I can’t say anything else. But if you were in front of me, after reading this post I would have just given you a huge hug without saying a single word.
    May God Bless You Dear πŸ°πŸ’πŸ’

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou dear. May God bless you 😊😊

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        πŸ°πŸ’

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  17. Simran sachdev

    Nice work

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks dear😊

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      1. Simran sachdev

        Also visit me

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      2. A learning poet

        Surely 😊

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  18. normabobb

    Beautiful, thanks or sharing

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    1. A learning poet

      My pleasure dear😊 Keep reading

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  19. 2B or Not 2B Writing Tips

    Gorgeous poem! You have such a talent. 😊 I have nominated you for the Liebster Award. You can read about it here: https://2bornot2bwritingtips.com/2017/07/17/liebster-award-nomination/

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou so much… I will definitely check it out😊

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  20. Cherylene

    Beautiful words to recognise a beautiful and special lady. This was amazing! Thank you for sharing.

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    1. A learning poet

      My pleasure… Thankyou for taking time to appreciate 😊

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      1. Cherylene

        You are amazing! Thanks for sharing. πŸ™‚

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      2. A learning poet

        😊

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  21. lisalotusqueen

    Very beautiful ❀

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou 😊

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  22. Shayra

    Beautiful sketch πŸ‘Œ.Touchy lines .sweet poem for motherπŸ’“β€

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou dear 😊😊

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      1. Shayra

        My pleasure 😊

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  23. Pooja Agarwal

    I think your mom is lucky to have you as your daughter. She would be so proud of you πŸ’Ÿ. You express your feelings so beautifully and you are an amazing painter also. πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜Š

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    1. A learning poet

      I am definitely a proud daughter… That you so much dear😊

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    2. A learning poet

      Thank you*

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  24. Sketchuniverse

    Reblogged this on sketchuniverse and commented:
    HI BEAUTIES ! TODAY WE’VE GOT A GREAT SKETCH MADE WITH CHARCOAL LIKE A MASTERPIECE. REALLY AN ANGELIC FACE. CHEERS MY DEARS πŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’šβ€

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    1. A learning poet

      That is so sweet of you… I am happy and honoured..m thankyou so much😊😊

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  25. myexpressionofthoughtsblog

    Sometimes a smile is enough!! Have no words to describe how beautifully you expressed your feelings towards your mother!!

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou so very much. Your comment means alot😊

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      1. myexpressionofthoughtsblog

        Most welcome

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  26. Avdhesh Dadhich

    Beautiful drawing

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thanks 😊

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      1. Avdhesh Dadhich

        Welcome

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  27. Travel Dream

    Beautiful sketch

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou so much😊

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  28. OV

    You express beautifully,
    I used to skeching but my skeches are not so good.
    Can you please give me advice.

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Heyy,
      I am not a professional. I also try.. There are some things that you can remember while you are sketching.
      First, give it time. As much as it needs… It may take one day, 3 months or even over a year… So be patient with it.
      Second, never appreciate your sketch.
      Third, sketch what you see. Don’t sketch what others see…
      Hope this helps… And keep sketching. It is all about the practice… Good luck dearπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

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      1. OV

        Thank uu.
        Hope I can match your stage soon.

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      2. A Learning Poet

        Good luck and…Best wishes… 😊

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  29. OV

    Can you please give me some tips on sketching.

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  30. lorraineanne

    Your drawing is amazing and I am touched by the poem accompanied with it..
    Thank you for sharing.

    If you get a chance, would you check out my art page?
    I’d really appreciate it!
    https://rawdumplings.wordpress.com/drawings/

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thanks for the visit… Your comment made me happy… I took a sneak peak of your site… And loved it.. will be back soon.. 😊😊

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      1. lorraineanne

        this means so much! thank you πŸ’˜

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