I Left…

I left.
The warmth of my mother’s hands.
The comfort of my father’s words.
The deep secrets with my sister.
The joints with my brother.

I left.
I never looked back.
I never complained.
I never thought again.

I left.
I miss them.
I care for them.
I fear their condition.

But the most worst of all is,
I left
And I never returned.

This is what we do.
We choose dying for nation
Over living with family.

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  1. Jeni G.J

    Wonderful dedication to the real heroes of the nation.

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thanks Jeni… ☺

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  2. Reticent Writer

    I love this. Such powerful words x

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    1. A Learning Poet

      My pleasure…😊

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  3. Manasi Umanita

    beautifully described..truely speaking before coming to the end where u disclosed that this is dedicated to our heroes, our soldiers..I felt so related to it..!!I am living far away from home..I miss family, keeping all the pain behind.. trying to work hard each day to fulfill the dreams..is really tough at times..!!

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    1. A Learning Poet

      I am very happy that you could connect to it… Yes I agree that it is difficult to be away from our family. But I am sure you are doing a great job😊 all the best… And thankyou so much

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      1. Manasi Umanita

        🙂 🙂

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  4. Infinite Living

    Very meaningful and well composed!

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou much dear..😊

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      1. Infinite Living

        You are very welcome 🙂

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  5. Subbashini Meenakshi Sundaram

    Great tribute

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou:-)

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  6. Heart to soul.

    Emotions beautifully portrayed. There is no love like love of soldiers for their nation. It’s beyond every sacrifice. Beautifully done sandali. Proud of you. 😊

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou bhavika. Means a lot. Salute to the soldiers.

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  7. radhikasreflection

    A befitting tribute to the heroes of a nation. They truly deserve our salutations!!

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou… and true. They and their families deserve massive respect and salute.. .. Thanks for stopping by.

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  8. pradumnawasthi

    It is just fabulous 👏👏

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    1. A Learning Poet

      😊thanks much

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  9. KNIGHT

    A beautiful and worthy salute to our real heros

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Pleasure😊

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  10. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    Respect🖖

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    1. A Learning Poet

      After a long time.. good to hear from you… 😊

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        After a long time feeling nice to talk. 😊
        Thanks…

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      2. A Learning Poet

        😊

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  11. Shikha Rai

    Very well written…strong words…amazing topic …and different layer of ur writing…proud of u keep it up beta☺

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Most awaited… 😊
      Thankyou soo much… 😍

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