Love#04

He was a traveller.
Visited every corner of my heart.
Crawled under my skin.
Swimmed in my eyes.

He was a musician.
Played his favorite song.
With my hair being his guitar.
My heart was his drum.

He was a painter.
I was his perfect canvas.
Sketched that curve of smile on my face.
Sometimes painted my cheeks red.

I don’t have words to describe him right.
He himself is a poetry I wanted to write.
Wishing to kiss his sleeping eyes,
Maybe could touch his dreams tonight.

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  1. Thedreamgirlwrites

    Amazing! 🙂

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou☺

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  2. Himanshu Sisodia

    It’s beautiful😊, may I know who inspire you too write such beautiful words?

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Will it be monotonous if I say surrounding?😛
      Well, actually I believe that our imagination is our inspiration. The power of observation, the curiosity to experience someone else’s life, or the thirst to show what you are going through, are somethings that motivates me to write. 😊

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      1. Himanshu Sisodia

        No it will not be monotonous, and I can totally relate with you on imagination is our inspiration, In fact I too believe in the power of imagination 😊And if you look closely into my logo you will find three words “Imagine, Inspire, Create” those three words are three rules in my professional Visualiser career😊Also I am glad to know that a fellow blogger believes in Imagination just like me😊👍

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      2. A Learning Poet

        There are very few people who can actually imagine… Soo just keep believing in that… All the best sir… Best wishes😊😊 hope to learn from you more…

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      3. Himanshu Sisodia

        It will be great a honor for me to learn from a fellow “Imagineer” like you😊 And I am just Himanshu so please don’t call me Sir,😊 And Ma’am, I would like to invite you to be my Guest Blogger of the Month, And in future, We can do some more Creative Collaboration together with your beautiful words and my Visualising skills😊👍

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  3. The passionate learner :)

    Beautiful poetry ❤

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Means alot😊 stay connected

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      1. The passionate learner :)

        Sure

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  4. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    I’ll wait for Bhavika’s comment😂😂

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Your choice. But what is that supposed to mean bdw?

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        Nothing… We were just talking about something yesterday that’s related to your post…so I’ll wait for her comment…

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      2. A Learning Poet

        Hmm… Interesting….

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      3. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        It’s nothing that interesting

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      4. A Learning Poet

        Considering the fact that you both were talking about me and my posts, I should decide.☺

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      5. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        We were not talking about your post. We were discussing something that, by coincidence, is related to your post.

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      6. A Learning Poet

        Well, then sorry, but it’s still interesting… 😁

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  5. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    Okie

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  6. ruebamughal

    So so beautiful 😍. How do you write such great poetry?
    Truly amazing😘😘

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou broo😊 means a lot … Keep supporting😁😋😍

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  7. Lost soul

    The picture is cutest. And the piece is wonderful ❤️

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thanks alot ma’am 😊

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  8. Heart to soul.

    I wish my “he” is a dancer who dances to my tunes. 😂😂
    It’s always nice to have a connection which makes your soul happy. Hope you find your “he” soon dear. Good luck 😊
    And yes…. I loved it so much. Keep writing. 😊

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou so very much😊
      Daljit was waiting for your comment… Now I am waiting for his reply on your comment😜
      PS: All the best to you for searching your he… People like him are rare I believe😂

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      1. Heart to soul.

        Hahaha… Then probably you will spam our comments, right.? 😂
        Maybe that’s why he was waiting for my comment. Because that’s what we were laughing about yesterday. 😂

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      2. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        😂😂😂😂😂

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      3. A Learning Poet

        No… then maybe I will do what I always do. And that is ignore. My tolerance power is really great. Thanks bdw. Haha. .

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      4. Heart to soul.

        Quite rude. But expected. People with great tolerance power do not ignore, they accept. Haha. You’re welcome.

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      5. A Learning Poet

        Oh soo sorry. Forgot to warn you that I am rude.
        And you are right. I accept your extra comments, read them and then ignore.

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      6. Heart to soul.

        I know it already. Thankyou for being so generous. 😂

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      7. A Learning Poet

        Not to mention.

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  9. Rohit Nag

    Sandali Ma’am !!!!

    Its amazing 😍
    Fantastic
    Mind-blowing
    Fabulous
    🤔
    🤔
    🤔
    Still not getting words to explain this, thats y i used ma’am😎
    The way u connected things with your imagination is too good.
    And yup he will touch his dream , my best wishes with him and u also☺️😇

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Rohit Sir!! Thankyou so much… I am actually laughing while typing this… And I wish that ‘he’ is reading this somewhere 😜
      Thanks alot dear..😊

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      1. Rohit Nag

        Glad my comment made you laugh ☺️ i really mean that comment .
        Yup hope so, that he will read or

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      2. Rohit Nag

        Or already read 😜 i dont know😜

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      3. A Learning Poet

        Let’s both keep hoping😊 and yes your comment really means to me.

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  10. gary j

    Just so love this…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou so much☺

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  11. Abhay

    Interesting read. Liked it.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou😊

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  12. deorahulsharma

    Lovely

    Liked by 1 person

    1. A Learning Poet

      Thanks alot☺

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  13. Himanshu Sisodia

    Hi there, I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award. Congratulations 🙂
    Visit: https://inspirehigh.blog/2017/10/09/my-second-liebster-award/

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou so much dear… 😊

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  14. lrnesy

    Nice

    Liked by 2 people

    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou

      Liked by 1 person

  15. Jyotirmoy Sarkar

    Very beautiful…loved it.

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou😊

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  16. Shayra

    Lovely dear😊👌

    Liked by 1 person

    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou😊

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      1. Shayra

        Welcome

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  17. shabdsarthi

    Awesome description of love bond

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Thankyou😊

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  18. Jeni G.J

    You rendered me speechless. But I’m making an effort to say something. First para was cute. Second one was sweet. Third one just blew my mind. I dont have words to describe it right.

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    1. A Learning Poet

      Jeni I always love your comments.. And saying just thankyou does no justice. So accept my sincere love today… And keep visiting 😊😊

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      1. Jeni G.J

        Much love. It’s My pleasure to visit your blog.

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      2. A Learning Poet

        That’s an honor for me😊 Keep visiting

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