Dawn to Dusk…

When the sun peeps through the sea,

The moon gets afraid.

Slowly turns off it’s light and

Lazily tries to escape.


Tearing the clouds apart,

The first orange ray,

Falls on the deep blue sea,

Surviving all through its way.


Water starts to shimmer,

Like golds and diamonds.

In this kind mother nature looks

Pure and adorable.


We see the sun moving,

It is us who actually move.

Making the sun climb,

And then darkness it removes.


On seeing the sun peeping through the clouds,

Birds are now up.

Ready to fight and struggle again

For food and for life.


Calm, stable and holy;

Nature is unblemished fully.

Imaginations and optimism are born,

At this time of dawn.


When arms of clock are straight,

The sun comes overhead.

Blistering with anger,

It becomes scorching red.


Slackly dozing in dreams,

Flying with the clouds.

Playing with the winds,

It hides in the woods.


Now bored in sky,

Tries to run fast.

Dimming it’s wrath,

Happiness now last.


Moon up and sun down,

Dark sky proud with its crown.

All in all coloured as lusk,

This is the time of Dusk.

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  1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    I loved the last stanza. It was having the feeling that comes at the end of all the problems. A cool and soothing night after a hot and tiring day…

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    1. A learning poet

      Glad you like it. ☺

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        😊

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  2. Heart to soul.

    A learning poet is quite a nature’s poet. Dawn to dusk is like living a entire life. From taking birth to ending breaths. The journey is beautifully described. Loved it.
    Phenomenally done! ☺️

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    1. A learning poet

      Wow… I love your description more than my post actually😁😁 thankyou so much… 😊😊😊

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      1. Heart to soul.

        Haha! All inspired by your post! It was entirely my pleasure 😊

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      2. A learning poet

        😊😊

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  3. shikha rai

    Beautttttttttiiiffuulllllllll😘😘

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    1. A learning poet

      😊 thaaaannnkkkuuuu

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  4. Heart to soul.

    And I loved how creatively you started with a picture of dawn and ended it with a photograph of dusk.
    Never to forget, you are an artist. 👏❤️

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    1. A learning poet

      I actually wanted to paint them, but as you know my condition, I couldn’t. It’s still okay right😁😁

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      1. Heart to soul.

        Hey.. Wow.. But promise me to paint both of the sceneries, as soon as you pick up the brushes. 😀
        I would love to buy those from you. ☺️

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      2. A learning poet

        Shhh… If my paintings will hear this they will become proudy… They are not worth selling. 😂😂😂

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      3. Heart to soul.

        See.. It’s okay right. I can’t afford Picasso. So I would instead buy them from my personal Picasso. 😊
        And paintings! Please don’t become proudy! 😂 okay.. Now please paint them for me. ☺️😀

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      4. A learning poet

        😂😂😂😂😂😂 I will… I definitely will

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      5. Heart to soul.

        Oh lovely! Bhaiya thoda thik thik lagana.. Na Tumhari na meri.. Thoda saste me😂😂

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      6. A learning poet

        Nai bhenji …. No bargaining… Aur khareeda hua maal wapas nai hoga 😂😂😂

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      7. Heart to soul.

        Dekho.. Baaki sab to thik hai.. Bhenji bola to mai free me le jaungi. 😂
        Please yar.. Meri Taraf dekho.. Acchi hu na mai.. Thoda sahi Sahi laga do na.

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      8. A learning poet

        Chalo didi roo mat… 5 rupay kam de dena..

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      9. Heart to soul.

        Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Ehsaanmand hu mai😂😂😂😂😂

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      10. A learning poet

        😂😂😂😂😂

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      11. Heart to soul.

        Chalo. Pack kar do. 😂😂😂😂😂

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  5. shikha rai

    Loved this one😃
    Keep it up beta😘

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    1. A learning poet

      Like

  6. Mr.Lonely

    Woow… Its like explaining the phenomenon to a toddler 😊..
    Loved it

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    1. A learning poet

      I hope the toddler understands 😂😂
      Thankyou utkarsh😊

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      1. Mr.Lonely

        You arw welcome 😇

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  7. Orange

    Beautiful lines! 👍

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks😊

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  8. Ξnigma

    Well crafted.
    Beautifully crafted. 🙂

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou 😊

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      1. Ξnigma

        You’re welcome. 😀

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  9. boundlessblessingsblog

    Loved the simplicity in your poem

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks☺

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  10. ruebamughal

    Wow! Dawn to Dusk, we used to have a poem or two in our school time, it’s so good to see you try them out and come out so successfully. Always keep writing😘

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    1. A learning poet

      I don’t remember the poem from school😂😂
      Anyway, thankyou dear… Keep visiting😊

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  11. Books N Me

    Beautifully expressed. I adored this poem.
    I feel it is the best one of the poems by you, that I’ve read.

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    1. A learning poet

      OMG… Thankyou so much… 😊😊

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      1. Books N Me

        You’re welcome.

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  12. Rohit Nag

    Omg……i cant express actually
    Just one word WOW 😍

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    1. A learning poet

      Admiring 😀 thanks

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      1. Rohit Nag

        ☺️

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  13. Shayra

    Beautifully written.A nature poet ,lovely described 👌

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    1. A learning poet

      ‘Nature poet,’ glad to hear it… Thanks dear😊

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      1. Shayra

        Most Welcome😍

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      2. A learning poet

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      3. Shayra

        😆

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