Triumph over odds

No matter how dark the path is; no matter how strong the opponent is; no matter how much people try to stop you. Remember you can achieve anything. Victory is all yours. Just keep trying. 

Far away from distant space

Clouds shed the little drops of heaven

Upon the far away hell.

Black clouds bent and rained.

Sun peeped out from behind and said-

“May I dance with you?”

Sky lightened up to yell

“Stay behind”, you burning ball soo warm

Meanwhile, wind start to storm.

Trees waved left to right

Said goodbye. Thinking of ruling over sun

They ganged up against her.

Clouds got empty and light

Wind blew away. Trees stood still and

Then  the sun peeped again.

This is my first creation in the form of haiku… Hope you like it. Do leave your comments telling me where it went wrong. And also tell me if it was good. ๐Ÿ˜›

Thankyou for bearing with me.

Happy monsoons ๐Ÿ˜Š


42 Replies to “Triumph over odds”

  1. You managed to frame it really well. I can imagine how difficult it must have been. Apart from framing it well, you added a concept of monsoon to it. And trust me, it became the loveliest. It was mesmerizingly good. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. A boy and a girl met
    They were Unknown
    For friendship they regret
    But its seeds were sown.

    It became a plant
    And later a tree
    Time changed against those
    And now they were not free
    The society opposed.

    Something was there in between Everyone thought
    But in reality the proof nobody got
    Their friendshipโ€‹ was real and strong
    But the rumours made it wrong
    The talks they lend
    Came to an end.

    For others they sacrifice
    Now no hi’s no bye’s
    Slowly ignorance was the key
    Which hated both he and she
    In the end they forgot each other
    And now both were happy with another.

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