When you rise…

When you rise from the odd

Make sure you justice the fall.

Make sure you come up brand new.

Make sure you are nothing like the old you.
You fell,

You stayed there

And gave yourself time.

It’s okay. Don’t worry.

Make sure it pains.

For it counts. It is worth.

You can cry.

Shed your fears.

But make sure you remember to climb.
When you rise from the dead.

Live nothing like before.

See beauty in everything.

And be someone to adore.
When you rise from the doom.

Make sure you love yourself,

This time.

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  1. Sameer.

    “Shed your fear”

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    1. A learning poet

      Yeaaa… Something wrong?

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      1. Sameer.

        Noo. Just liked it so repeated it

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      2. A learning poet

        Okay sorry ☺

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      3. Sameer.

        Sorry for what? πŸ˜›

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      4. A learning poet

        I thought you were mocking me.πŸ˜›

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      5. Sameer.

        Not at all. Cant dare 😝

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      6. A learning poet

        ☺ thankyou. Keep reading.

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      7. Sameer.

        Sure.

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  2. Abhay

    Resurrection

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    1. A learning poet

      You summed up in the shortest way possible 😁

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      1. Abhay

        ☺️

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  3. Daljit Singh Phagotra

    I liked the line “When you rise from the dead.” Something’s catchy in this line, something’s pulling me into. Idk…. Nice thought though…
    Have a good night…

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    1. A learning poet

      Maybe because we all die everyday a lil bit. And still we manage to remain alive everyday. And that is all that matters. Good luck.
      Thankyou
      And good night.

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      1. Daljit Singh Phagotra

        Yeah!! You are right..

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      2. A learning poet

        ☺

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  4. epiphanyofsumi

    Beautiful!

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou☺

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  5. Vaibhaw verma

    meaningful and beautiful composition

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou sir.

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  6. francefougere

    Very beautiful, simple with true words and a rythm. Merci πŸ™‚

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou for your kind words.☺

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  7. shikha rai

    This is something motivating ….one of your best writings…
    I want to read it again Nd again…
    Keep it up beta😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou☺

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  8. devikaparekh

    Very nice

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks☺

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  9. Heart to soul.

    Lovely. ☺️
    This was a treat to be able to read. Very inspiring. Well done! ☺️

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    1. A learning poet

      Thankyou ☺☺

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  10. Ajay Vyas

    Hey
    Thank you for taking the time to step on over to Love Relaished Ink. It’s wonderful to have your whimsical soul as a new companion on my long and winding road.
    From what I have seen of your blog so far, I’ve no doubt you are already finding writing a totally engaging and personally fulfilling experience. I hope the pleasurable company of words will always flow and follow you as you flow following the flow of your flowing path flowing into the wide blue yonder, and flow onwards towards the adventures that follow the flow beyond that…
    Best wishes. Take care always in all ways for always.
    Namaste

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    1. A learning poet

      Hey friend,
      Thankyou for such a formal, heartwarming comment. I love your blog and I try to catch up every blog of yours.
      Thankyou for your kind words. Yes, I do enjoy writing.
      Hope you like it. Keep reading and take care.
      Namaste.

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      1. Ajay Vyas

        Pleasure is all mine miss poet umm what ur name by the way

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      2. A learning poet

        My name is Sandali singh. But Miss poet is so good to hear. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜Š

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      3. Ajay Vyas

        Sure miss poet then are u on Instagram by the way u from where?

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      4. A learning poet

        I don’t use any other social media sites. And I am from the city of lakes. 😊

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      5. Ajay Vyas

        Ahh bhopali u are

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      6. A learning poet

        πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ yeaaa totally. Where are you from.

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      7. Ajay Vyas

        India’s heart

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      8. A learning poet

        Ohh great. You are called dilli wale here πŸ˜‚

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      9. Ajay Vyas

        Nope I guess Gwalior is the heart of India

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      10. A learning poet

        Really? Sorry My mistake πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ weak GK

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      11. Ajay Vyas

        No problem

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      12. A learning poet

        Have a good day. 😊

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      13. Ajay Vyas

        Wish u the same

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  11. Megala

    Motivating lines!

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    1. A learning poet

      😊

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  12. Jeni G.J

    Make sure you’re Nothing like the old you, make sure you love yourself this time..Beautifully written…your last post and this is connected..πŸ‘

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    1. A learning poet

      Yess I try to motivate myself by writing. I hope you like it. ☺

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      1. Jeni G.J

        Sometimes I do the same😊

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  13. Nitin

    The last line was EVERYTHING.
    EVERY GODDAMN THING.
    Lovely stuff.

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks alot ☺

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  14. Sneha Saha

    Wow!! 😍

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    1. A learning poet

      Thanks dear😊

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  15. Jokerswild

    Rise of the Phoenix! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

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    1. A learning poet

      😊 right

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  16. ruebamughal

    Wow😍 each line is so amazing. Rising up after you fall is really hard for each one of us, when w fall we loose all our hope and we need a lot of motivation to rise up. And this was just a right piece of great motivation! 😘

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    1. A learning poet

      Yes it is not easy.. and it is okay. We can take time. But when we get up we should not think about the fall then ….
      Thankyou 😊

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